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Monday, March 24, 2025

Pradyot Chatterji’s Banal Arc, Benign Sky—A Multi-Layered Exploration of Human Imperfection and Rational Dissonance

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The book I read recently truly impressed me, hence I thought I should know what really impressed me in it. So, I drafted a review, and that's how this blogpost originated. "Banal Arc, Benign Sky" authored by Pradyot Chatterji, ISBN 9789356975194, published by Ukiyoto Publishing

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Pradyot Chatterji’s Banal Arc, Benign Sky—A Multi-Layered Exploration of Human Imperfection and Rational Dissonance

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For a work to be considered a novel, it must be an exploratory exercise that examines the intricate dynamics among events, ethos, and characters. While a short story can present a straightforward narrative of events, characters, and motives, a novel demands deeper exploration.

Pradyot Chatterjee’s Banal Arc, Benign Sky exemplifies this multi-layered approach, regardless of whether it fulfils its authorial intent or reaches a definitive resolution. By the end of this immensely readable volume, I found myself asking: What was it that I enjoyed so thoroughly over the fortnight as I became part of the exploratory journey that Shri Chatterjee masterfully orchestrated?

The author’s objective is best conveyed in his own words: “As a writer, he does not believe in creating only ideal, virtuous characters worthy of emulation, nor in depicting people holier than they are actually seen in real life. He believes it is not effete ideals and goodness, but true courage with robust optimism that can combat the prevailing cynicism.”

Indeed, all the characters in the novel are flawed individuals shaped by their experiences and surroundings. They are conceited, angry, largely unsociable, and deeply absorbed in their own worlds—thinking, wondering, contemplating, concluding, and asserting their perspectives on those around them. A jilted lover relentlessly chases an unattainable dream with unwavering tenacity. A lawyer looks down upon everything—from his clients to the judges and neighbours. A talented child faces repeated betrayals: bullied by friends at a science exhibition, exploited by a research guide who steals his thesis and deceived by a mother who separates from his father only to pursue her selfish interests. He also contends with his mother’s lover, who seeks favour in her eyes, and a so-called spiritual guru who preys upon him. The list of betrayals continues.

These characters are not inherently corrupt; instead, they inherit certain proclivities from their ancestors and are shaped by the toxic environments in which they live. This environment, steeped in hypocrisy, irrationality, and superstition, inevitably influences their actions. A talented young man, cheated by his research guide, seeks solace in an ashram, only to become a victim of its abbot’s predatory abuse. The author refrains from moralising, leaving the reader to navigate the conflicting forces at play.

Chatterjee skillfully juxtaposes superstition with rational explanations. When a cat stops visiting a house after the death of its head, some characters interpret it as an instance of interspecies love and consequent despair on bereavement. However, another character offers a practical explanation: the cat, fond of fish, simply avoids the household because no fish is cooked during the funeral rituals. In another instance, the author allows a myth to stand unchallenged. Jogesh, spiralling into madness, claims that lunacy strikes in the morning. His words unfold in a way that seems to confirm his belief, yet no rational counterpoint follows.

Ultimately, Banal Arc, Benign Sky is an unflinching portrayal of human frailty and resilience, challenging readers to engage with its complexities and draw their own conclusions.

Numerous instances in the novel reveal the conflict between rationality and irrationality, with consequential outcomes. This, along with a cast of characters drawn from the imperfect yet real world, enriches the novel. The author successfully integrates the burning issues of the superstition-rationality dichotomy and flawed human nature into his narratives.

The author does not favour stereotypes, but where they seem inevitable, he employs them to impart momentum to his storytelling. The principal character, Niti, is portrayed as a talented individual with an overflowing scientific spirit who challenges Jogesh, his mother’s boyfriend, for his blind adherence to scripture. However, he later seeks solace in a spiritual guru’s teachings, only to discover that the guru is a pervert. Niti is a talented scientist yet also dabbles in astrology. The author suggests that Niti’s mental turmoil has multiple causes: his failure in love due to his mother’s obstinacy, the double-dealing of his research guide, Dr Rana, and the discovery of his mother Maya’s betrayal. He is depicted as a lover of snakes, frogs, and other creatures—not as a naturalist, but as someone protesting that humans are the worst creatures, untrustworthy and even worse than snakes and “philosopher” cats. In a word, this is what ‘ambivalence’ looks like. Regarding Niti, the author writes, ‘The voice that saluted God and his faultless factory, and the one which defied the same god.’ In that sense, all of us, whether believers or sceptics, are ambivalent, which ultimately reflects the shape of the real world.

Reflecting on the components of the multi-layered exploration that entertained and enthralled me, stirred my emotions, and made me relate to my life experiences as a writer, I can say that Shri Chatterjee has used all the literary tools in his arsenal to make Banal Arc, Benign Sky an intellectually engaging and profoundly thought-provoking work. His use of similes achieves effects that no adjectives or adverbs could match. For instance, he writes, ‘The oars shattered the moon in the water. Ribbons of molten gold swirled in the water as the boat slowly went past the light into the darkness.’ While intensifying Maya’s arrogance, he describes, ‘Her eyes were a peacock throne of vanity, a laser gun of contempt.’ When Maya rejects a marriage proposal for her son, Niti—brought by the bride’s mother herself, the bride being Niti’s beloved—the author uses the metaphor: ‘Only a mother could ransack an entire garden of flowers and still have her quota of wreaths and flowers.

The author’s rich prose is also evident in the following description of the deficient state of Sarkar, the magician’s house: ‘His house should have been on top of a mountain where magic, miracle, and mystery were wrought by the cloud like an endless rosary.’ To explain Jogesh’s one-sided love for Maya, the author draws a metaphor from his familiar world of computers—familiar because the author is a metallurgical engineer by education—and writes, ‘Some unknown hand had etched a program on a chip and embedded it in him, and his life went on according to the program which he could not remove or replace. But as he played out his life according to the program, it perpetuated in him the feeling of love though nobody else ever understood its algorithm.’ Many such high points in the narrative consistently captivate the reader.

The novel’s scenes are manifold and vividly depicted: a crematorium, inundated courtyards populated by snakes and centipedes, a mishap at a bridge under construction, a rail pushcart rolling on iron rails pushed by two people while conversing amorously, a brothel run by a matron, the night sky revealing its grandeur to a stargazer, a Bel tree haunted by a ferocious Brahmin ghost, a school science exhibition sabotaged by jealousy and competitiveness, a magician’s trick unsuccessfully investigated, prostitutes bathing under a tap—one of whom is informed by a client about the early signs of leprosy, a night watch party killing a thief, a telegram being crafted strategically to communicate a death without causing devastation at the receiving end, a Muslim sadhu dispensing herbal cures for all ailments, a snake charmer carrying cobras and Russell’s vipers for entertainment, a planchette session disguising a sexual advance in darkness—everything, you name it, and it is there. These richly narrated scenes contribute to a multi-layered exploration that leaves the reader in awe, turning pages from beginning to end.

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A. N. Nanda

24-3-2025

Balasore

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Sunday, March 23, 2025

Links to all my books

 So far, I have uploaded all my books to Amazon to make them available to my readers as ebooks and paperbacks, regardless of where they live. I have also shared the links with many of my contacts; they find them handy when ordering them from Amazon. In addition, I bring such links here. It is yet another place where such links are available.

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Novel -- Ivory Imprint 

Link for ebook -- Ivory Imprint https://amzn.in/d/ekb1sk0

Link for paperback -- Ivory Imprint https://amzn.in/d/cdhFswy

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Short story collection -- The Remix of Orchid 

Link for ebook -- The Remix of Orchid: Second Edition https://amzn.in/d/8IJWvNl

Link for paperback -- The Remix of Orchid: Second Edition https://amzn.in/d/0sH4Vla

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Short story collection -- Virasat (in Hindi)

Link for ebook -- विरासत (Hindi Edition) https://amzn.in/d/jej7Vfw

Short story collection -- The Legacy: Tales from the Postal Trail

Link for ebook -- The Legacy: Tales from the Postal Trail https://amzn.in/d/gIhRa2R

Link for paperback -- The Legacy: Tales from the Postal Trail https://amzn.in/d/5ykrzOO

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Short story collection -- एक साल बाद 

Link for ebook -- एक साल बाद (Hindi Edition) https://amzn.in/d/4mUeaCw

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Short story collection -- Stories Old and New 

Link for ebook -- Stories Old and New https://amzn.in/d/1S6QPnd

Link for paperback -- Stories Old and New https://amzn.in/d/d0ThSvO

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