Two Visitors
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The story is rather big. In a blog we are advised to post only those stories that are small and crisp so that people can finish reading them before they can even finish the contents in their coffee mugs. Still I chose this story from my book "The Remix of Orchid" just to afford some chance to my readers to browse what I wrote in that book. The story was written some 15 years ago, say on 20-06-1997 to be precise. It was a sweltering evening of Delhi summer and I was staying for the night at Dak Bhavan. I had then come there from Port Blair in some connection. Suddenly I had a feeling that there was something crying inside me to be expressed. There was nothing around, not even an exercise book. And somehow I arranged a bunch of thin typing papers. Oh yes, people used to type then and computers were not so familiar a scene then. And then....
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Two Visitors
The
morning dawned to announce the arrival of yet another ordinary day at
Mallicks’. There was absolutely no reason why Mr Mallick should have treated
the moment special. Not even a new toothbrush was there, crying out for its
inaugural use. Personally, he would not remember if any fresh activities had
been added to his routine in the recallable past. His unvarying timetable these
days consisted of everything he could mechanically repeat—getting up late,
mumbling his morning prayers in a jiffy, rushing to the bathroom, squeezing his
morning exercises to make up for the late-rising, and so on. At this juncture,
he had only one thing to bother. It was his business. Despite his fondness for
lingering in bed, he had made a point of opening his shop at eight o’ clock
sharp come what may. His home was too quiet a place to tarry at beyond that.
Unless his bookkeeping workload necessitated occasional early morning homework,
opening his shop thus constituted his first serious activity of the day.
He was a clothier, a
thriving small-timer in the retail line, and he dealt in various types of
ready-made garments and fabrics. It was a business he understood like nobody
could. For him, regularity was both the price and premium of his business and
he was only too willing to pay that to remain in it. What it meant to become
lax in business—Mr Mallick had learnt it the hard way. He would not like to give,
once again, an impression to his trading circle and customers that he had lost
interest in business. He did not want to relive the trauma of bankruptcy and
slowdown.
Mr
Mallick had long since made up for the neglects that his venture suffered
during its formative phase fifteen years ago. That was the time when misfortune
struck him; his only son wandered off and got lost somewhere while he was
travelling. The search that followed was intensive but fruitless. It could not
have been any better, since the child was hardly two years old then and he
could not have come back on his own from where he had gone adrift. The police
did their best to keep their file open for years together, but had no good news
to convey to the grieving parents. Offering handsome rewards in the press and
on television to anybody who would trace the missing child did not work. But in
the process Mr Mallick was himself lost in utter disorientation, and his
business went from bad to worse each passing day. Stocks remained unsold and
became obsolete; huge loss accrued month after month; credit schedule got
defaulted. Like those proverbial rats deserting a sinking ship, all his
employees abandoned him to his fate. It appeared as if his business had reached
the dead end. But Mr Mallick showed great fortitude and slowly began to forget
the mishap. He returned to his business to start it again with a sense of
stoical resolve. And strange are the rules of business; it proved all the
prognosis of the prophets of doom wrong one by one. Before late, Mr Mallick was
back in the race once again.
In the
meantime, his wife Dina gave birth to another son. Hurrah! It was a godsend.
The welcome twist in fortune of the family assuaged the feeling of loss that everybody
carried so painfully for two long years. Mr Mallick settled down to his
business with a purpose and since then he had not looked back. By now, time had
almost blotted out the memory of his agonizing past.
But
today the arrival of two visitors at his door brought him an unexpected
interruption. As he was rushing to his shop, he bumped into the strangers
interested in something important. One of them was a middle-aged man, the same
age as Mr Mallick’s, and the other a boy in his teens. They were unimpressive
in their look, but eager in their pursuit.
The
meticulous trader was in two minds—whether to ignore them and advance or to
probe whys and the wherefores from the strangers. Inexplicable curiosity got
the better of him. He decided to halt, enquire, and then proceed. With an
animated inquisitiveness, he called them and enquired.
‘Yes, may I help you? Seems you’re looking for somebody, aren’t
you?’
‘Mallick Babu’s residence…. Er, that’s what we’re searching for,’
said the middle-aged man.
‘Well, you’re talking to Mallick. Tell me then what can I do for
you?’
‘Nothing in particular for me, sir. Rather, I’ve come here to return
something precious,’ said the man looking straight into the eyes of Mr Mallick.
Now Mr
Mallick started to feel the pangs of curiosity more intensely. What could be
that precious thing in the possession of the stranger? A dirty looking stranger
who did not even have a proper shave? Had he really lost something? In managing
thingies he had already got proof of slips in his own memory. He went on
checking those prone-to-loss items one by one. Was it his key ring? He searched
his pocket. No, it was right there. What about his driving license? No, it
should be inside his car. He looked at his index finger. His loose ruby ring
that was found missing twice during the week and salvaged from unusual places
like washbasin and bookshelf was also in its place. What else could it be?
Finding him puzzled the stranger said, ‘Mallick Babu, it’s not one of
those you’re guessing. Your most precious thing could only be your son. That’s
what I want to give you back.’
Mr
Mallick looked rather perplexed. The stranger had just said about some ‘thing’
in his possession; now he said about his son. His son Balu had already gone to
school. He had been an early bird by habit because he needed to wake up in time
to catch the school bus. Dina would not allow her son to skip his school even
for a day. Then what could have happened to his son? Was it that he skipped his
school for the day? Or was it that his son had started playing truant? No, a
deviation like this could not have escaped Dina’s notice so easily. Was it by
any stroke of bad luck again that his son had been kidnapped?
‘Son? My son? Why? He has gone to his school,’ exclaimed Mr Mallick.
‘No, Mallick Babu, here’s your son. Can’t you recognise him? Quite
natural, quite natural. Anybody in your place would have the same difficulty. I
know it’s a matter of fifteen years now, really ages have gone in the meantime
since the day you lost him,’ said the middle-aged man enthusiastically.
Finding the stranger confident and condescending, Mr Mallick could not
help feeling a bit piqued. He even could not place his son just by one look at
the face of the boy standing nearby since he could not summon anything striking
about his face and features. It was a distant event that took away his son from
him some fifteen long years ago while he and his family were travelling from Calcutta to Lucknow.
The kid was only two then. The critical mind of the successful trader got the
better of him. He looked at the boy standing beside the man—shabbily dressed, as
if without a bath for several fortnights, his dishevelled hair grown tousled
and sticky. He looked grossly anemic and hopelessly rustic.
‘Who are you? And where from have you brought this boy?’ asked Mr
Mallick in one breath.
‘Please let me sit for a while, Mallick Babu, and then I’ll tell
everything in detail,’ pleaded the middle-aged man.
Mr
Mallick had to comply with the small impertinence of the man and he had, as it
were, no other go at that moment. Getting squeezed between his disbelief and
inquisitiveness, he called the duo, led them to his drawing room, and offered
them the chairs. On entering the room, the boy preferred to stand in one corner
whereas the man did not accept the seat but sat on his haunches beside the centre
table. Then he requested a glass of water. Quite reluctantly, Mr Mallick called
out his servant and asked for a glass of water for the man. While the servant
went inside, Mr Mallick again looked at the boy who was overwhelmingly gawping
at the pictures on the wall. He felt like asking him some questions but then he
just waited till the stranger finished his report.
The
servant came back with two glasses of water. While the boy did not even look at
the tray, the middle-aged man took hold of both the glasses of water one by one
and quickly drained their contents. Then he started to narrate.
‘I’m Ram Parvesh. I hail from Rangat in the Andamans. This is the
boy we got from Howrah Railway Station many years back. Then we’re coming from
our native village in Gaya
and shifting our luggage from the railway platform to Khiddirpore dock. Our
ship was to sail in the afternoon and the embarkation had already started. When
we were so rushing against time, we ran into the boy, helpless and unattended.
He was in tears and he came to my wife to take her sari-end in his tiny grip.
She stood there, only to give comfort to the boy and watch if anybody was
coming to take him. Our luggage was substantial and the whole process of its
movement took a little over half an hour. But none came there in search of the
child. So we thought it was our duty as humans to protect the kid; we felt pity
and carried him along. We call him “Station” since he was picked up from a
station. We’re poor people, Mallick Babu. Hence we couldn’t give him education
beyond class five.’
Mr Mallick was
listening to Ram Parvesh attentively. Each additional word the visitor uttered
had its effect in creating more doubts than it could resolve. Seated in his
front was a man, quite a strange man at that, who could not even remember the
exact year in which he picked up the boy. Even if he got the boy in the manner
he had just described, why did he not wait at the platform for a while to hand
him over to his parents? At least one of them could have. In a matter of a few
hours only, Mr Mallick had gone to the platform on realising that the boy was
left somewhere in the railway platform. Why did the man not hand over the boy
to the police when he himself was not in a position to take care of him? On the
other hand he chose to take him along to such a distant place called Rangat in
the Andamans? Having taken the boy along, what were the immediate circumstances
that compelled him to return him after the lapse of fifteen long years? The man
did not even explain as to how he came to know that Mr Mallick was his father.
It appeared to him as if he was being led into another shrewd trick. Once in
the past, a trickster had nearly succeeded in forcing a boy on him. It was his
presence of mind that saved him then from being taken for a ride. Now he should
perhaps do something drastic like that.
He was just about to
reach for the telephone to call the police when a twitch of hesitation crossed
his mind. He thought he should consult his wife Dina before he took any step to
drive the strangers away.
Dina
was a simple housewife nearing her forties. She had literally rebuilt the
family from a state of ruin by her love and perseverance. Being simple was not
her weakness and nobody could ever take her lightly. She was not sufficiently
educated, but she knew them all that were expected of her. It was her
understanding of the needs of everybody in the family that made her the queen
of the household. The medicines for the old parents-in-law on time, a patient
ear to all her husband had to say at the end of the tiring business day, the
neat homework and spotless uniform of her school-going son, the need to assuage
a servant in sulk—the lady had the responsibility towards all. She was always
on the run, always sought after, and the whole household had no time to realise
that. Old people in the neighbourhood used to contrast their own plight with
the generous consideration shown to the elderly at Mallicks’, fellow
businessmen envied Mr Mallick for a wife who never nagged, and the children of
the neighbourhood demanded their parents to give them shoes that looked as
shining as Balu’s. For the last eighteen years, Mr Mallick had seen his
business stumble but not his wife Dina; she had not taken a short day’s off for
a fever even.
That
her husband was lingering for almost half an hour in the drawing room without
proceeding to his shop appeared something unusual to Dina. She came to know
that Mallick was dealing with a stranger and decided to see that for herself.
As she entered the drawing room, she was quick to guess the kind of problem her
husband was beset with. He was clearly in a quandary. Under these circumstances
she used to offer her judgment without waiting for explicit invitation to
contribute. She had given plenty of intelligent solutions to the problems that
bothered her husband in the past and her grateful husband had rewarded her
every occasion she authored a beautiful decision. They were only token
rewards—a pair of earrings sometimes or a necklace at some other, depending on
the gravity of the problem she had tackled—yet she had proved her
indispensability in the process. Now, having appreciated the state of mind of
her husband, she went ahead joining the loose ends of the narration produced by
the man called Ram Parvesh. This gave her a fair grasp of the issue. And she
decided to take over.
‘How did you come to know our address?’ Dina asked in a firm but
assuring voice.
I came to know
that all by chance. As if written onto the boy’s destiny, I happened to meet a
man recently who gave me the clue I was looking for. Just listen to me how it
all happened,’ Ram Parvesh made himself further comfortable on his seating
place by a slight twist of his body, clicked his knuckles one by one, and
started to narrate his version. All through, his narratives manifested an easy
flow that had nothing pre-preparedness about it.
All that he told was
complicated but thanks to his natural style of delivery it was not finally
difficult to follow the contents. A fellow from Purulia district had very
recently come to Rangat to work in a timber factory there. Ram Parvesh used to
run a tea stall near it. The other day while talking to his fellow worker, the
new customer at his shop revealed that he hailed from a place called Jaypur in
Purulia district. Ram Parvesh was quick to capture the lead, as the name
‘Jaypur’ was such a nebulous one that had eluded him for years. By this name
alone one could not have made a guess about the location of the place, as India
is replete with ‘Jaypurs’ like ‘Rampurs’ or ‘Mahatma Gandhi Roads’ or
‘Srikrishna Nagars’. However, he asked his customer if there was a tailor shop
called Tuhin Tailors at his place. The gentleman affirmed it promptly and
wanted to know if by any chance Ram Parvesh also hailed from Jaypur. The latter
replied him in negative but revealed to him that a few years ago they got a
boy-child, aged about two years, from Howrah Station. He could not trace his
parents and brought him along. The boy, while he was so picked up from the
station, was wearing a red and black striped shirt tailored by one Tuhin
Tailors, Jaypur. Then Ram Parvesh asked him if he had any knowledge about the
loss of a child of the age group. His new customer and the inhabitant of Jaypur
tried and tried, and it was only after a lot of efforts he could recollect. Then
he handed down this address to Ram Parvesh to try.
‘That is how,’
Ram Parvesh went on to conclude his long account, ‘I’m finally lucky to meet
you, Mallick Babu.’
There
was an uncomfortable calm. The confused couple wanted to listen to more from
the stranger, but they had reached a juncture where more they heard more they
disbelieved. And more they disbelieved more they wanted to listen to from the
stranger. But Ram Parvesh, on the other hand, was eager to know if his entire
effort coming all this way to Jaypur were well channelled. He desperately
wanted to be assured that he had reached the right spot.
“Isn’t the name of your shop Mohan Textiles, Maaji?’ Ram Parvesh’s question echoed an eagerness that apparently had
no effort to hide anything behind.
Dina was
quite lost how to react to a counter-question like this. She perforce agreed
with Ram Parvesh. Her curiosity surfaced in the shape of another probing
question.
‘Right then, Ram Parveshji, tell me why didn’t you immediately hand
over the boy to the police for finding out his parents?’
By
this time Ram Parvesh had managed to tide over whatever inhibition he was left
with, thanks to the perceived warmth in the tone of the lady of the house. He
explained, ‘As I told Maaji, we were in a hurry. We had to embark our
ship. We weren’t interested in running into the hassles of police scrutiny. On
the other hand, we couldn’t manage to be so cruel as to leave a helpless child
to the mercy of the apathetic crowd of the platform. Before we were able to
take a decision, the boy had already started accompanying us. There was hardly
any choice before us.’
The
dialogue was progressing under a highly charged atmosphere. The couple were
looking at each other’s face in utter astonishment while Ram Parvesh was
answering all the queries effortlessly.
Dina
looked at the boy, Station. She was in two minds whether to go across to the
boy and make her motherly overtures. But then she was a mother, after all; and
like all mothers she knew the difference between her own son and a son of
someone else’s. How would she embrace a child presented by a stranger just like
that? For her, a son is a son if and only if groomed well, like Balu for instance.
And about Station? No, her son could not be of this look and with this get-up.
At
that crucial juncture, Mohit and Mohan, the two brothers of Dina arrived on the
scene. In a matter of minutes, they were able to familiarise themselves with
the topic-under-deliberation. It was a case of an imposter trying to force a
child into a quiet household for some long-term trickery—as simple as that! The
brothers were also reminded of the drama that took place at their sister’s a
couple of years ago when an astrologer nearly succeeded in thrusting a teenager
criminal on the family.
Mohit
and Mohan took it upon themselves to help the couple in trouble unearthing the
truth. Presently, they joined them in the session of interrogation that was
under way. Their mind prejudiced, the context filled them with anger. They
visualised the extent of agony an imposter was capable of bringing to the
family. The brothers unhesitatingly made public their impression of the
stranger as well as their quick prescription to solve the problem—they just
advised rejecting the version of the imposter as a cock and bull story. Himself
a policeman by profession, Mohit went a step ahead. He was readying himself to
deliver a few hard slaps on Ram Parvesh’s face to extract the truth. But Mohan,
a person of relatively cooler temperament, would not like to hurt an old man in
the stranger. Between them the brothers went on arguing if such a harsh
treatment was really warranted.
Station, the boy who
accompanied Ram Parvesh was extremely fatigued and hungry after a long sea
voyage. He was not properly fed during the journey as they fell short of money.
After getting down at Calcutta
port they managed to reach this place taking the first available train. In the
process they had hardly had their lunch or dinner the previous day. The boy
started wondering as to what kind of family he was going to be introduced into
where minimum courtesy of offering a cup of tea to a guest was so casually
forgotten! The tea stall he was working in with his Papa Ram Parvesh was more
respectable a place to earn a living and spend time. Had the police not wanted
him for his mischief, he would not have come all this way to the mainland as a fugitive.
He was merely in bad company and filched a shop in the town to pay for their
cricketing equipment. While his friends managed to escape, Station was caught
red-handed by the private guard on beat. Before the police could reach the
venue, Station managed to escape.
Station
thought he should not have feared the police so much. He should not have agreed
to his foster-father’s suggestion for a trip to the mainland in the first
place. He had nothing to do with his original parents. He knew his
father as he knew himself; even so, he could not explain why the old man was so
terribly afraid of retaining him. What was the big sin in it and what big
difference would it have made to him just to allow a teenager to continue living
with him? Ever since the old man collected some information about his original
parent’s whereabouts, he had been making suggestions that Station should go
over to the mainland and search his original family. But Station had
spurned them like he would have rejected a suggestion for wearing the woollens
in a hot summer day. But soon the fear of police was to convince him that he
should run away. Run away—where? He did not know it could be so difficult! So
harrowing!
Suddenly Mohit raised the pitch of his voice and disclosed his identity
as the police officer of the area. He summoned both of them to the police
station to give statements. Hearing this Ram Parvesh lost his calm and fumbled.
Temporary incontinence seized him and he had a tinkle on his cloth. More than
Ram Parvesh, Station, the little fugitive from the mid-sea country, felt
panicky. He had come all this way from the Andamans more to escape the police
torture than to get back his lost parents. It appeared he was pushed into an
asylum of the lunatics to hide himself from the world of unsympathetic
sane.
Observing Ram Parvesh helplessly fumbling for words, Mohit slapped him
and stood up in no moments to whisk him away to the police station. For once,
Dina, the lady in command, could not decide about the best way to react; she
could not stop her brother discharging his duty as a policeman. Mr Mallick
could not decide as to which side he should support. In the other corner
Station could sense the impending trouble. He could no longer wait for the
inevitable to happen. He just fled away from the scene quickly and very
surreptitiously.
And
then he reached at the jetty at Khidirpore dock after a day’s train dash. There
he happened to meet a known face at the gate at the time of embarkation and
managed an entry into the ship without a valid entry ticket. After completing a
journey spanning over four days and three nights and in semi-starved condition,
Station reached Port Blair and heaved a sigh of relief. Next day he took a bus
straight to Rangat requesting a free trip and, without any loss of time, went
to the police station to surrender himself to the police. He was taken to
custody and lodged in jail as none came forward to apply for a bail on his
behalf. At Jaypur poor Ram Parvesh failed to satisfy the hair-splitting
interrogation of the police. Mohit, now very happy to see that his intelligent
suspicion saved his sister from a sure robbery, saw to it that the imposter was
put behind bars pending his trials in the court of law. The newspapers of the
locality reported religiously what the police told them.
Mr
Mallick and his perplexed wife went on believing and discarding the episode
alternatively. When Mohit was around, he used to convince them that they were
saved from a serious fraud owing to his timely intervention. When Mohit was
gone, the couple used to relapse into their usual mental hide-and-seek between
believing the whole story and rejecting it. At one point of time they would
reach a point that compelled them to believe retrospectively all the narrations
of the stranger, as he was forthright, convincing and simply a kind old soul.
Next moment they would see the credibility of the version evaporating before
their eyes owing to the remoteness of the incident. They had neither the
patience nor the clue to further investigate the matter on their own. True, they
knew there was a method called DNA testing which people in doubt apply, but the
most awkward question was: who did want that in reality? More than anything
else, they were probably unable to accept the boy that stood in contrast to
Balu, the well-groomed son of theirs.
Station and Ram Pravesh languished behind bars one thousand and five
hundred kilometers apart on either side of the Bay of
Bengal.
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By
A N Nanda
Coimbatore
6-10-2012
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Labels: short story
4 Comments:
Thanks Amit.
Dear Sir,
The story “ Two Visitors ” tells a fact that “ Truth alone Triumphs ” is not true. Truth become a fact when evidences are there. Otherwise nobody will care about the truth even it relates to him. I think it is the morale of this story. The fate of STATION is so pity and his role is tear creating one. Thanks for the nice story sir
----- N.Subramanian Tirupur
Thanks NS. After I wrote it some readers gave me the feedback that the pathos of R. N. Tagore's "Little Master Returns" is also felt in this story. And before I published my book I'd given this particular story to my professor to read. The old man was happy to find some "spark" in this. The professor did not expand his comment but I knew he had liked it. In any case this one happens to be the first-ever short story I wrote in English way back in June 1997.
As for the browser compatibility, may I advise you to try firefox?
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